I had a bloated wedding videography page on my ForeverLuckyFilms.com website.  Way too long.  No one, especially Gen Z kids would read it, and they’re my target market at this point.

So as an experiment, I copied and pasted the text into ChatGpt, Claude-2, and Bard with an identical prompt.  I’m going for brief and persuasive.  Let’s see how it went.

Here’s the Prompt:

Can you reduce the copy by 50% being sure to highlight key facts.

Here’s the original text

Hello there! I’m Chris, and your wedding day is not just another event for me, it’s a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity to capture your unique love story in a cinematic art form. Together with my dedicated team, we’re committed to preserving all those unforgettable moments.

Our approach is anything but ordinary. We have had the honor of capturing over 400 weddings from Maine to California, showcasing each couple’s unique narrative through stunning and cinematic videos. Our unobtrusive style allows us to record every detail, from the smallest glance to the grandest gesture, without ever missing a beat.

We offer personalized packages designed to fit your specific needs and budget. Our services incorporate a variety of styles, including documentary, cinematic, and more. We also take pride in including drone footage and raw clips in almost all our packages to ensure a comprehensive view of your big day.

You might have seen our work on Instagram or YouTube, where we’ve been able to connect with an incredible community of soon-to-be-wed couples like you. We’re not just in the business of wedding videography – we’re in the business of capturing joy, love, and all the emotions in between.

Our past clients rave about our work, and we’re confident we can deliver a wedding video that you’ll cherish for a lifetime. We’re now also introducing a 360 Video Photo Booth, adding another dynamic way to remember your day.

At the heart of our work, we value communication and transparency. We promise to work closely with you, ensuring we capture all the special moments that matter most, telling your love story in a way that’s uniquely you.

Are you ready to make your wedding unforgettable? Contact us today to schedule a consultation and discover how we can help you capture your wedding day in a way only we can. Let’s start this journey together!

Claude’s response:

I’m Chris, and I’m committed to capturing your unique love story through stunning, cinematic wedding videos. With my dedicated team, we’ve had the honor of showcasing over 400 couples’ special days from Maine to California. Our unobtrusive style allows us to record every detail without missing a beat.

We offer personalized packages to fit your needs and budget, incorporating documentary, cinematic, drone footage and more. Our past clients rave about our work, which you can see on Instagram and YouTube.

We now also offer 360 Video Photo Booths, adding another way to remember your day. We value communication and transparency, promising to work closely with you to capture your love story in a way that’s uniquely you.

Are you ready to make your wedding unforgettable? Contact us today to schedule a consultation and discover how we can preserve your magical moments in a stunning, cinematic film you’ll cherish.

Bard’s

Chris and his team are wedding videographers who capture stunning and cinematic videos that showcase each couple’s unique love story.

• They have captured over 400 weddings from Maine to California.
• They offer personalized packages designed to fit your specific needs and budget.
• Their services incorporate a variety of styles, including documentary, cinematic, and more.
• They take pride in including drone footage and raw clips in almost all their packages to ensure a comprehensive view of your big day.
• They have an incredible community of soon-to-be-wed couples on Instagram and YouTube.
• Their past clients rave about their work.
• They are now introducing a 360 Video Photo Booth, adding another dynamic way to remember your day.
• They value communication and transparency.
• They promise to work closely with you to ensure they capture all the special moments that matter most, telling your love story in a way that’s uniquely you.

Contact them today to schedule a consultation and discover how they can help you capture your wedding day in a way only they can.

Lastly ChatGPT:

Hi, I’m Chris, and we’re here to make your wedding day unforgettable. With over 400 weddings captured across the country, our team specializes in crafting cinematic love stories.

Key Facts:

• Chris and his team are dedicated to preserving your unique love story through cinematic art.
• They’ve covered over 400 weddings nationwide, ensuring each couple’s narrative shines through stunning videos.
• Their unobtrusive style captures every detail, from small glances to grand gestures.
• Personalized packages are available to fit your needs and budget, offering various styles like documentary and cinematic.
• Drone footage and raw clips are included in most packages for a comprehensive view of your big day.
• They’re well-known on Instagram and YouTube for connecting with engaged couples.
• Past clients highly recommend their work.
• They now offer a 360 Video Photo Booth for a unique memory.
• Communication and transparency are their core values.
• They promise to work closely with you to capture all the special moments.
• Contact them for a consultation to discover how they can uniquely capture your wedding day.

There are a few key differences between Claude, Bard’s, and ChatGPT’s:

Claude’s response is more conversational and aimed at directly addressing the potential client. Bard’s and ChatGPT’s are more informational and third-person. Claude’s response is the shortest and most concise while still including service details. Bard’s has the most comprehensive detail. ChatGPT aims for a balance of conciseness and detail. ChatGPT specifically calls out capturing “cinematic love stories” and focuses on the emotional aspects. Mine and Bard’s are more fact-based about the services offered. Bard’s concludes with a clear call-to-action, whereas Claude and ChatGPT’s end on more general notes.

All three highlight the key facts from the original content but take different approaches in tone, structure, and emphasis on emotions vs facts.